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the always rocking of the carpet. waves and pulls.
ocean floor.

it's his pure human scent.

bare light bulbs, naked arms. the scent, the scent.
grips, lips, came through the ceiling, walls;
ocean floor.
it was the symphony, its loose writing of love.

it's his pure human scent.

oh, the scent, the scent.
"beautiful"

that's all it took.
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NullifiedKnight's avatar
Sara, this is wonderfully written and does an excellent job
of capturing the sense of someone's scent washing over you
in an all consuming wave, flooding your mind with thoughts
and images that might otherwise be unseeable.

(Not quite a word, unseeable, but more fitting than invisible for my meaning.) ;)