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I watch the sky explode.
Fragile bits of lace drip from the tree bark.
There are angels on my skin,
and the small of each mind is bruised.
There is silver on my fingers,
and a hole engulfs the forest.
There is autumn on my lips,
and for a time i feel secure.

I watch the sky explode,
dust forms rings of music,
and then, i am gone.
sometimes, im just not sure.
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wyldhoney's avatar
It flows nice, it has depth; my only problem is line two, which I feel could use a line break after 'lace'.